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Your eyes,
Your smile.
Your hair,
Your style.
You're perfect,
Can't you see?
But why would a great guy like you
Love a crazy girl like me?

I'm not pretty,
And I'm not cool.
But we still hang out,
Sometimes, at school.
I love you,
Can't you see?
But why would an awesome guy like you
Love a loser like me?

You're funny,
You're smart.
And you've got
A great heart.
You're the one,
Can't you see?
But why would a nice guy like you
Love a bad girl like me?

I'm not gorgeous.
I'm not 'hot'.
Those other girls have
Something I don't got.
I'm not good enough,
That's what you see.
And that's why a guy like you
Won't love a girl like me.
©2007-2010 ~emochick13
:iconemochick13:

Author's Comments

ummmmmm......i was bored.......:D

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:icondark-demon8:
This is really good,
Very sad,
And the emotions are portrayed well,
I love this <3
Good work...


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[.So eager for eternal damnation.]

=Org-infinity Sell them your heart today, or else >D

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:iconxrosesxrulex:
Oh....Wow....
You're an awesome poet!
It's very very very good! It's good for song material!
You should amke it into a song then play it for me!

Who's the guy!!?!?

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Photography, Drawing, and Writing are what I love creating/doing. Music=Inspiration.

Go check out my gallery and give me luffs! :excited:

-Rose
:iconemochick13:
haha....thanks......and i would make it into a song and play it if only i knew how to play.....and the guy is someone.......i like......a lot....:D

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hullo!
:iconxrosesxrulex:
Call me and tell me!

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Photography, Drawing, and Writing are what I love creating/doing. Music=Inspiration.

Go check out my gallery and give me luffs! :excited:

-Rose
:iconemochick13:
ok.....no....wait......ill e-mail ya...:D

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hullo!
:iconshadowvamp132:
i love it!!i already know who the guys is!!
you really should make it into a song
and i think you should let (lets nickname the guy you;re talking about dude) "dude" read the poem...:) :D

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aint aint a word!!!
my coolness rubs off on everyone!!

NOTICE!!: lost brain: sortta small, pink and squishy!! if found please let me know!!
:iconemochick13:
yeah....and "dude" already read it.....haha

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hullo!
:iconmitsuki420:
is this about "Esma' "? and all the stuff you said about you is not true! You are beautiful! and you're one of my bestest friends! i misses you! and i love the poem!

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I'm not crazy... or am i?... wait, no i'm not! am i?

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